For this week's Six Sentence Sunday, I return to my YA urban fantasy WIP, Osland.
After ducking out of a school dance with her date, protagonist Gail Dorjee stumbles upon some bullies from the school's main clique roughing up her friend, Leandra. She decides enough is enough and steps in to deal with them with a little threat, but realizes something a lot more than a little bullying is going on:
“You’re going to leave her alone right now, or I swear I’ll knock you around so hard that by the time you wake up disco will be back in style.”
The two girls looked at each other and grinned. They turned and took several steps toward me. In unison, with a monotone voice, they said, “You don’t belong here, Miss Dorjee.” They pointed to Leandra. “She doesn’t either, but I need one of you."
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22 comments:
That last line is pretty ominous. :-/
Ow, creepy and fascinating! Excellent!
Uh-oh! I wonder what will happen next. An intriguing six!
Oh, I'm hooked! great six!
Oh, wow! Very curious about why they need one of the protagonists. :)
I love that character!
Creepy! Well done!
ooo, I'm intrigued! Great six :)
Disco will be back in style, lol! Nice line!
Great six. SOmething doesn't look good for someone.
Creepy. I love it!
I need to know what they need her for. Like now, please.
Creepy! I love her threat. :o)
Thanks all.
I'm definitely curious as to why they need one of the outcasts for whatever they're planning. Interesting six.
Oooo! I'd love to know what happens next. I really like this premise.
Great six.
And thank you so much for stopping by my blog, even though I musta screwed up entering SSS this week. Means a lot that you were paying attention.
All my best to you,
Allure Van Sanz
I was glad to stop by.
Oo, very intriguing. Great twist in this teaser.
For a couple of girls, they sure sound menacing! Eek! Love the disco back in style line.
haha "knock you around so hard that by the time you wake up disco will be back in style." Fantastic! Oh I love the snark :) Fab six!
Well, that's scary. What's going on there?
love teh six
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