The moment of truth comes as she works her way through some trees toward a wall at the edge of the school grounds:
I reached out and pressed my palm against the brick. A fog clouded my mind. After I stepped back, I shook my head in a feeble attempt to clear it, but I couldn’t even remember why I’d even wanted to touch the wall. A little bit of concentration cleared out the mental mist, and my purpose resurfaced. I eyed the wall.
“Now, that is just not right,” I murmured.
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“Now, that is just not right,” I murmured.
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23 comments:
Just not right...love the phrase..love the six.
Intriguing!!
I like her ability to touch and discern the "just not right." Great six.
Very cool. Now I want to see what's beyond the wall too!
You bet that's not right! Very intriguing!
Oh I like that - maybe it's a school for vampire children? (oh sorry that's one of mine) couldn't resist - good snippet
Oh, interesting. What's not right? I wanna know!
Wonder what's going to happen next...
Ending on a hook...you're such a tease!
But I dig that. ::grins:: Good six.
Best,
Allure
I want to know what' "not right". Very intriguing!
Oh, mysterious! I like it!
Interesting stuff--makes me wonder what she'll discover next.
Love the building of the suspense
Ooh, I want to know more! Great job!
Great six! Sounds like a great book! I think you missed a word here, tho: "I shook my head in a feeble [word?] to clear it, . ."
That's what last minute editing gets you!
Yeah, it should be a 'feeble attempt'. :)
I want to know what's not right. What kind of school is this?
Intriguing.
Now I want to know what is hidden behind the wall. Great six!
In-ter-rest-ting. :)
Can't wait to find out what's up wiht the wall.
Curious six you've given us. I'm wondering if the wall is cloaked? Magic to muddy the mind. That sort of thing.
Just for the record, the school is, allegedly, just a Seattle boarding school with a bit of an 'elite' reputation. :)
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