Saturday, May 14, 2011

Six Sunday #6: With Friends Like These

I'm jumping back to my Regency paranormal romance WIP, A Woman of Proper Accomplishments.

In an earlier Six Sentence Sunday, Helena was caught by her friend Cassie kissing a visiting gentleman, Mr. Morgan.

This six is sometimes later when Cassie makes it clear how she views the situation:


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“Perhaps he imbibed too much and then laid down a wager with other gentlemen about being able to seduce you.” The glee in Cassandra's eyes suggested she found the possibility more exciting than disturbing. “Oh, I do hope it was a large wager. You are worth it, Helena.”

After taking a deep breath, Helena said, “Cassie, one might claim you my foe to say such things.”

“I did specify a large wager.”

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22 comments:

  1. Lmao! Genius. Gotta love frienemies.

    Probably one of my most favorite posts that I've read since joining in the fun.

    Awesome.

    Best,
    Allure

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  2. Great banter between theses two - really leaves you wondering whether they are friends or not with that hint of spite. :)

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  3. "I did specify a large wager." LOL Wonderful! I look forward to more from these two friends.

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  4. Not sure if she isn't maybe her foe. Well done.

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  5. What a wonderful title! Esquisitely written !

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  6. Sounds like two women standing on the fine line between friend and enemy. Great exchange.

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  7. Withe friends like that, who needs enemies?

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  8. Very well written. The large wager makes all the difference. Friends forever.

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  9. There is obviously much more to the story, but I do wonder if Cassie is friend or foe. Great six!

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  10. Hee! I like Cassandra's attitude.

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  11. snicker. As if the amount of the bet would make it right. Great tone between the two.

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  12. LOL! Fun six!

    Your characters have great voices :)

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  13. Great exchange. Nothing like a little sarcasm to light a fire.

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  14. Sounds like frienemies to me!

    Love it :)

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  15. Got to love Cassie's last line

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  16. LOL. Sounds like there's some history there, too. Nice job!

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  17. Great dialog between close friends. Formal, yet sassy at the same time.

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  18. Excellent snippet, and intriguing scene. Ah, the days before reality TV, when people made their own drama... :)

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